Ooh, a lovely species. I may make one :3 Oh, also, you made a few grammatical errors if you'd like me to point them out so you can correct them? (I hope I'm not being a Grammar Nazi ;_
oh I don't mind--I tend to make grammer errors, and always am glad when someone points them out. Even if I don't fix them right away, it'll help for things in the future.
actually, now that you mention it. I did notice beforehand but of course I'm too lazy to fix it, I noticed "they're coats and markers" is obviously a typo..
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